Ode
Daniel Yun – class 11
Dear my power energy band
How I like to have you on my round wrist. I feel a great comfort with you on my round wrist. One day, I did not have you on my wrist. Discomfort that I felt in that period was the biggest discomfort that I felt during my 13 year life. Other people who are related to me always say “why do you keep buying this stupid power energy band? It just wastes your money! With that fifty thousand won, I will rather have a dinner!” But, I just hear those words with one ear and let it out with other side ear. Not only you give comfort, you also improve my sports skills a lot! It is scientifically proved that you improve 15~30 percent of my sports ability. I cannot just imagine sports game without you! Maybe, I will be fired from my school soccer team! That is a great problem that can give a great effect to my popularity in soccer ability. I believe that you will give me lot of things even from now on till you or I die. I love you, power energy band!!
This is a good ode however try to personify the wristband. Give it human qualities.
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