Wednesday, August 15, 2012

creative essay


Daniel Yun
Creative writing (chain writing)

             Once upon a time, there was a smart boy called Jake. He was very wise and had a great ability in sports that we use ball. One day, he was selected as school representative soccer player and went in a soccer match with another school that had great attackers. In the match, Jake was selected as midfielder. But, he did not pass to his teammates and he was executed from his team. So, his school soccer team lost the soccer match with that school. Jake was so angry that he was executed from the soccer team. Jake wanted revenge in soccer coach who fired Jake from the team. The way he revenged was making the soccer coach be separated. Soccer coach, Johnny’s girlfriend was Loocile and Jake made them be separated by saying that Johnny has another girlfriend Ana. Johnny and Loocile had a fight, and Jake felt great. He was satisfied by himself, and he was also back in the team by saying that he will be okay. Now as he was back, his revenge ended and he helped Loocile and Johnny to be closer again. Finally, they married and they lived well ever after.   

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