creative essay

Daniel Yun

Creative writing (chain writing)

             Once upon a time, there was a smart boy called Jake. He was very wise and had a great ability in sports that we use ball. One day, he was selected as school representative soccer player and went in a soccer match with another school that had great attackers. In the match, Jake was selected as midfielder. But, he did not pass to his teammates and he was executed from his team. So, his school soccer team lost the soccer match with that school. Jake was so angry that he was executed from the soccer team. Jake wanted revenge in soccer coach who fired Jake from the team. The way he revenged was making the soccer coach be separated. Soccer coach, Johnny’s girlfriend was Loocile and Jake made them be separated by saying that Johnny has another girlfriend Ana. Johnny and Loocile had a fight, and Jake felt great. He was satisfied by himself, and he was also back in the team by saying that he will be okay. Now as he was back, his revenge ended and he helped Loocile and Johnny to be closer again. Finally, they married and they lived well ever after.   

ode

Ode

Daniel Yun – class 11

Dear my power energy band

How I like to have you on my round wrist. I feel a great comfort with you on my round wrist. One day, I did not have you on my wrist. Discomfort that I felt in that period was the biggest discomfort that I felt during my 13 year life. Other people who are related to me always say “why do you keep buying this stupid power energy band? It just wastes your money! With that fifty thousand won, I will rather have a dinner!” But, I just hear those words with one ear and let it out with other side ear. Not only you give comfort, you also improve my sports skills a lot! It is scientifically proved that you improve 15~30 percent of my sports ability. I cannot just imagine sports game without you! Maybe, I will be fired from my school soccer team! That is a great problem that can give a great effect to my popularity in soccer ability. I believe that you will give me lot of things even from now on till you or I die. I love you, power energy band!!  

reflective essay

Reflective Essay

Daniel yun

                      What kids should learn from adults: spring video

   Who do you think should teach other one? Adults teaching children, or children teaching adults? Some people might think that children should teach adults because they have positive point of view and they are pure. But usually, adults teach children. Now, I would like to tell you about video “Spring”. This video tells us how adults can teach children and why it should be adults who teaches children. Adult monk taught the young monk in this video by making the young monk know that if he does not like something, others will also not like that. In the next body paragraphs, I will compare and contrast my experience and adults teaching children.

    First of all, adults have more experiences than us. When I was young and I could not solve conflict with my friend, teacher (who is also adult) helped my friend and me to be closer again. We did not have enough experience, so we could not solve the conflict between two. But adults, who had lots of experience with conflicts and other things could solve problem between my friend and me. By this situation that children (my friend and me) could not solve a problem between two, but when teacher solved it so easily, I learned that adults were wise and they should teach children.   

     Secondly, adults are more eager to teach others than children do. I had an experience that I felt this very strongly. When I was in kindergarten, I knew math very well than other boys or girls. So, teacher ordered me to teach other children in front of the whole class. But, I could not talk well in front of the whole class and I was also not eager to teach other friends. But when teacher came out in front of the whole class, she explained the information very easily to other children in kindergarten. So, I felt that teacher, or adults were more eager to teach others. Eagerness is important in teaching, so adults should teach children.

     In conclusion, adults should teach children. The reason is that they are more eager to teach, they have more experience, and other many reasons. I wish lots of children in Korea can learn a lot from adults who are eager to teach, and has lot more experience than children. Again i say, adults should teach children.

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DIAMANTE POEM

                                               EVILS
                                    SCARY         VIOLENT
                           TEACHERS     PAs    ANGRY MOM
                        HAS A   BAD PERSONALITY          ANGEL
                         PRETTY   KIND  GOOD  PERSONALITY
                               MOM IN ORDINARY FEELINGS
                                    MY  YOUNGER SISTER
                                         ANGELA OAKEY
                                                  DAD

Daniel Yun

Angela Oakey’s writing class

                             Joseph Kony, now bye bye!

Kidnapping kids while they are sleeping. How do you think about this situation? Isn’t that kind of person bad? Absolutely yes. Imagine that you are kidnapped by a stranger when you are sleeping. I will be very sad and will miss my mom and dad. What if that stranger commands you to kill your mom and dad? I would just run away even though there is danger of being killed. This stranger is called Joseph Kony. Now, people are trying to make this guy, Joseph Kony famous. I oppose to this because Kony might feel threat and run way, Kony might start a war, and Kony will kidnap more kids. Also, l will tell you why people who tries to make Kony famous is wrong.

          First of all, Joseph Kony should not be famous because Kony might run away if we make him famous. If we make him famous, Kony will know that we are after him, so he will feel the threat and run away. So, we might not be able to capture Joseph Kony. Then, the situations will get even worse. Also, if he runs away, he will kill children that he kidnapped before running away. This is the reasons why we should not make Joseph Kony famous.

         Secondly, Joseph Kony might start a war between other countries or against Uganda if we make him famous. Even if Joseph Kony feels worried about being captured, he will not give up his dream ‘Getting a great power and showing it to the whole world’. To keep his power, he will use children that he kidnapped as solders to fight against others. Then, other countries might not be able to fight bck because they will have to kill children that Kony kidnapped to capture or kill Kony. If this situation really happens, it will be hard to stop Kony. It is because soldiers or other adults will not kill children. To prevent Joseph Kony starting a war using children, we should not make Joseph Kony famous.

           Thirdly, Joseph Kony will kidnap more children if we make Joseph Kony famous. As I said in my fourth paragraph, Joseph Kony might start a war. To start a war, he will prepare more for a war. Joseph Kony will prepare more soldiers, and those soldiers will be children in Uganda that he can kidnap. This time, he might take all children in Uganda. It is because he will have to fight against a well trained army. Also, he will gather more children to show that he has a large army. So, we should not make Joseph Kony famous to save children in Uganda.

          

            Lastly, some people that try to make Joseph Kony famous are wrong. They say that people will gather and government will have to send their army. But, before government sends an army, Joseph Kony will run away or threaten the children. So, people who try to make Joseph Kony famous are wrong.

        

            In conclusion, we should not make Joseph Kiny famous. Reasons are that Joseph Kony might start a war, kidnap more children, and run away. These were why we should not make Joseph Kony famous and people who tries to make Kony famous is wrong.

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